Friday, March 29, 2013

Dandelion Smiles

Carpe Diem
March 29th - dandelion

dandelion smiles -
late at night, under full moon
two lovers embraced


NaHaiWriMo
March 29th - hook

thin willow branches
streatching towards the clear lake 
as hooks for my dreams



17 comments:

  1. Dreams of the lake that I will take.

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  2. "as hooks for my dreams"—Beautiful!

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  3. Both beautiful. Agree with Dana..."as hooks for my dreams".

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  4. An extraordinary haiku for Carpe Diem, very romantic ... can feel romance in the air, the feeling of Spring.

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  5. Hooks for your dreams. I like that. As well as the sweet dandelions.

    Shannon at The Warrior Muse

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  6. The peacefulness and imagery are very nice

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  7. I enjoyed both of these.
    Kindling sweet memories, thank you :)

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  8. I can't help but feel that there's something ominous about that lovers' embrace under the full moon. Could it be because you are writing in Transylvania? :)

    Dandelion’s Fortitude

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    1. I'm writing from near Transylvania, so that must be the reason.

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    2. I'm enjoying this little exchange, although I sense Count Dracula lurking somewhere in the background...

      Dandelion Season

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  9. I can just see those dandelions shining in the moonlight laughing at the lovers!

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  10. love the idea of branches stretching as hooks for dreams. Beautiful :) Enjoy the weekend.

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