Saturday, March 30, 2013

Pine Trees and Paper

Carpe Diem
March 30th, Onitsura's Special#29, voice of the pine

my childhood pine tree
still burdened with snow in March
waiting Blessed Easter

dim pine tree fragrance
through all day open window -
I can smell young spring

 
NaHaiWriMo
March 30th, writing ustensiles
 
gazing at the moon;
through a thin sheet of paper
I feel its poem

I use trees to write
my poems about spring nights
inspired by owls

18 comments:

  1. Lovely first haiku, very nice..in 2nd think Spring is young anyway already, but very nice.

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  2. The pine trees can't sing until the snow melts! Maybe by Easter!

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  3. All the spring, works for me and the moon too, same as my zoo, sorta haha

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  4. beautiful spring day here
    snow is 99% gone

    now the pines can raise their voices
    in high harmony to the basswood

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  5. Lovely—especially the first one!

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  6. Blessed are those who are still on speaking terms with the pine trees of their youth!

    Beneath the Pine Tree

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  7. "I use trees to write
    my poems about spring nights
    inspired by owls" this is one of the most beautiful haiku I have ever read ... true magic !!!

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  8. I love both of these poems - wonderful moments captures in so few words. Thanks for sharing!

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  9. Beautiful poems. I didn't know there was a month dedicated to Haiku.

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  10. Brilliant! Beautiful set of haiku. That first haiku is a gem and winner.

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  11. Young spring - hmmmm - it does feel young every single year!

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  12. Young spring, delicious. I've got my windows and doors open because it's in the 50's. Amazing how warm 50's feel in the sunlight when one is done with winter.

    The haiku was wonderful, as well. I like how you wrapped the theme in on itself.

    Shannon at The Warrior Muse

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  13. Very nice, spring will come, I'm sure

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  14. I think snow is a burden that many trees, the pine among them, are wanting desperately to shrug off!

    Seductive Pine

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  15. aloha Adriana - i like the image you create with your childhood pine tree still burdened with snow in March. a very now moment. cool. aloha.

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  16. Beautiful entries. I adore the first one. :-)

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  17. Lovely poems. I particularly like the fourth.

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