Carpe Diem
Yuki no hate (end of snow)
old man on the porch
at sunset contemplating
the March melting snow
in my clear garden
all day long, sun melting snow
sipped by shy snowdrops
NaHaiWriMo
March, 14th prompt - circle
the circle of life:
Mother Nature reborn
from dust and ashes
Two beautiful haiku. You weave a stunning image with your verses.
ReplyDeletethanks for stopping by and for the nice words!
DeleteVery nice
ReplyDeleteI didn't realize there's a flower called snowdrop
Are we visited by the same old man?
Cheers!
JzB
I don't know, we just might be!
Deleteglad I've helped you discover those beautiful flowers!
Maybe the snow is melting because of the old man's contemplating...
ReplyDeleteBrush Away Snow
possibly... we have to investigate this matter!
DeleteI really like that first one especially!
ReplyDeleteit's my favorite too!
DeleteVery nice indeed, thank you :)
ReplyDeletethank you, jrb!
DeleteYes, I hope to be able to contemplate the melting snow soon.
ReplyDeleteYou're just way too eager for spring, Bjorn!
DeleteLast Snowflake
I think we all are!
Deletealoha Adriana - i like the moment you have gone after in the first one. "old man" and "winter passing" has a nice connection to it. aloha
ReplyDeletebeautiful haiku! thank you so much for following my blog:-)
ReplyDeletethank you, laura!
Deletesipped by shy snowdrops -- oh that's really pretty ^^
ReplyDeletethank you!
DeleteI love those, but I really loved the 'sipped by shy snowdrops' line, too. Marvelous.
ReplyDeleteyhank you, Mary!
DeleteI like that last line, "sipped by shy snowdrops".
ReplyDeletethank you, Mary!
DeleteMother Nature reborn from dust and ashes is such a wonderful thought !!!
ReplyDeletethank you!
Deletethey went well together :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful imagery!
ReplyDeletethank you, K!
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