Haiku Heights
Prompt - origami
spring origami -
the mighty winds from the North,
folding trees at will
NaHaiWriMo
March 9th prompt - salt
sea waves washing tears -
the spring breeze creates ripples
in salted water
March 10th - erosion
witnessing time change,
mountains eaten by water,
shore swallowed by sea
Carpe Diem
March 9th prompt - Hamaguri (cherry stone clams)
I've actually never heard of something like that before, so I'll limit the prompt to what I know
in the morning dew,
no other strategy games,
hiding under shells
the rules of our game
always changing like spring winds -
strategy, no shells!
March 10th prompt - Kiji (Pheasan)
pheasant hunting night -
giving away the close prey,
a cry from a tree
I hope you all had a great weekend!
Your origami haiku is really beautiful! Wonderful work. ☺
ReplyDeletethank you, Dana!
DeleteA page full of delights, thank you :)
ReplyDeletethank you, jrb!
Deletethanks for the rich post :) a thoroughly enjoyable read ^^
ReplyDeletethank you for taking your time to read int!
DeleteI like the origami haiku. You take it beyond the word of paper to the roots of paper. Nice.
ReplyDeletethat was the idea, Alice! thank you!
DeleteFrumos!
ReplyDeleteMultumesc!
DeletePowerful imagery in the Origamy
ReplyDeletethank you!
Deletealoha Adriana - your "in the morning dew" ku has multiple meanings with clear imagery on each line. i like that a lot. aloha.
ReplyDeletethank you, you made my day nicer!
DeleteLovely set of haiku. The first one is awesome :-)
ReplyDeleteCheers!
Gracy
Thanks, Gracy!
DeleteYour origami haiku is divine!
ReplyDeleteHappy to hear you like it!
DeleteLove your natural take on origami! :)
ReplyDeletethank you - I was surprise myself to come up with it ;)
DeleteThe origami haiku is unique Adriana. you have delved deep into the base . Great attempt :) Loved the rest of the haiku too. :)
ReplyDeletethank you, Maliny! you're very kind!
DeleteOrigami, Erosion, and Cherry Stones are all wonderful. Beautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteweekend mix is simply brilliant, each haiku a treasure in its own way...lovely work Adriana!!
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