Saturday, March 16, 2013

Swallows and Storms

Carpe Diem
 March 16th, #146 - Tsubame (swallows)

above my window
a spring melodic chirping:
swallows' nest full again


NaHaiWriMo
 March 16th - storm

fighting a March storm,
almost covering the skies,
the returning birds


Haiku Heights
 March 16th - cacophony

worst cacophony:
in spring, while rain is falling,
sounds of broken hearts.

36 comments:

  1. it's a great haiku trio.. really liked the second one ^^

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  2. Lovely set, the beautiful named one :) The one for cacophony is truly poignant . .

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  3. Many people look forward to those full swallows' nests. I am one of them, although I don't see/hear them too often!

    Swallows Haiku

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    1. They're beautiful and amazing! and quite friendly, once they get used to you!

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  4. Sounds of broken hearts are sad !!!

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    1. yes, they are! unfortunatelly, from time to time, those nasty sounds come to say "hi!"

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  5. Enjoyed these very much. Have a wonderful weekend!

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  6. Lovely haiku! I really liked the last one in particular.

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  7. I enjoyed the first one the most, all were wonderful.

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  8. What a lovely set of spring haiku!

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    1. thank you, Wabi! I hope that by writing enough of them, sping will set in.

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  9. each lovely haiku could work beautifully for the 'swallow' prompt....I love the moods you create...

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    1. thank you joanne, you're too kind! I kind of tried to get that effect.

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  10. The last one was heartbreaking.. but spring is a season of love and with new love there is alway a risk someone else loses.

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    1. yes, love lost, loved found, loved gain - a circle

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  11. Lovely haiku for all prompts. Especially moved by the broken hearts.

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    1. why does every body love broken hearts? ;)

      thank you, Maggie!

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  12. Very well done. Did they loose a chick from the nest?

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  13. Wonderful set. The Broken heart is great

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    1. thank you! let's hope we won't get to meet that sounds again!

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  14. "Sounds of broken hearts" - that is a PERFECT PERFECT line. Excellent haiku

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  15. the second one: oh my goodness!. i felt tired after reading it. really! its a tribute to the birds, really! loved them all!

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  16. Perfectly crafted haiku, Adriana. Cacophony of broken hearts.

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    1. thank you, it seems to be the favorite around ;)

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  17. waow....im in awe of your cacophony haiku..the thought is just perfect! I so loved it..thanks :)

    Do visit: http://njn-sorceress.blogspot.in/

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    1. thank you, Sanjana! Apparently everybody knows the sound of broken hearts.

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  18. Last one took me to the farms. Worry written across faces with untimely rains.

    beautiful!

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