Carpe Diem
March 16th, #146 - Tsubame (swallows)
above my window
a spring melodic chirping:
swallows' nest full again
NaHaiWriMo
March 16th - storm
fighting a March storm,
almost covering the skies,
the returning birds
Haiku Heights
March 16th - cacophony
worst cacophony:
in spring, while rain is falling,
sounds of broken hearts.
it's a great haiku trio.. really liked the second one ^^
ReplyDeletethank you! :)
DeleteLovely set, the beautiful named one :) The one for cacophony is truly poignant . .
ReplyDeletethanks, Maliny!
DeleteMany people look forward to those full swallows' nests. I am one of them, although I don't see/hear them too often!
ReplyDeleteSwallows Haiku
They're beautiful and amazing! and quite friendly, once they get used to you!
DeleteSounds of broken hearts are sad !!!
ReplyDeleteyes, they are! unfortunatelly, from time to time, those nasty sounds come to say "hi!"
DeleteEnjoyed these very much. Have a wonderful weekend!
ReplyDeletethe same, Dana!
DeleteHappy shopping time! ;)
Lovely haiku! I really liked the last one in particular.
ReplyDeletethank you, Cherie!
DeleteI enjoyed the first one the most, all were wonderful.
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely set of spring haiku!
ReplyDeletethank you, Wabi! I hope that by writing enough of them, sping will set in.
Deleteeach lovely haiku could work beautifully for the 'swallow' prompt....I love the moods you create...
ReplyDeletethank you joanne, you're too kind! I kind of tried to get that effect.
DeleteThe last one was heartbreaking.. but spring is a season of love and with new love there is alway a risk someone else loses.
ReplyDeleteyes, love lost, loved found, loved gain - a circle
DeleteWonderful spring haiku!
ReplyDeletethanks, Christine!
DeleteLovely haiku for all prompts. Especially moved by the broken hearts.
ReplyDeletewhy does every body love broken hearts? ;)
Deletethank you, Maggie!
Very well done. Did they loose a chick from the nest?
ReplyDeleteHaven't counted them yet! ;)
DeleteWonderful set. The Broken heart is great
ReplyDeletethank you! let's hope we won't get to meet that sounds again!
Delete"Sounds of broken hearts" - that is a PERFECT PERFECT line. Excellent haiku
ReplyDeletethank you, Judith! very kind of you to say so!
Deletethe second one: oh my goodness!. i felt tired after reading it. really! its a tribute to the birds, really! loved them all!
ReplyDeletethanks, Sankara!
DeletePerfectly crafted haiku, Adriana. Cacophony of broken hearts.
ReplyDeletethank you, it seems to be the favorite around ;)
Deletewaow....im in awe of your cacophony haiku..the thought is just perfect! I so loved it..thanks :)
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thank you, Sanjana! Apparently everybody knows the sound of broken hearts.
DeleteLast one took me to the farms. Worry written across faces with untimely rains.
ReplyDeletebeautiful!