Friday, March 22, 2013

Picnic?

Carpe Diem
March 22nd prompt - #151, haru Fakashi (deep spring)

deep spring green mirrored 
in deep waters' clear surface -
perfect picnic time

NaHaiWriMo
March 22nd prompt - scale

in March afternoon,
the happiness of children
no scale can measure

Weekend is here! Have a good, relaxing time and enjoy this still shy sun of spring!

15 comments:

  1. If there are no picnics, it's really not spring, is it?

    Deepening Spring

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    1. I agree! I can't wait for the green forests and warm sun so we can really enjoy a true picnic!

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  2. Awesome haiku, both are little gems, but (of course) the one for Carpe Diem is my favorite.

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    1. glad to see you're objective, Kristjaan! ;)

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  3. Very nice! Have a great weekend, friend. ☺

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  4. Picnic? Hmmm....certainly not here! You have painted such a gorgeous pond-side scene...I see the dappled sunlight...

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    1. unfortunately, it's painted by memory... still waiting for spring around here!

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  5. We don't get much of a spring. We get fake out spring, which just ended. Now it's back to cold.

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    1. same here! i was so happy to have those nice few and then, bam!, cold again!

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  6. Very nice...both haiku. Love your take on "scale".

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  7. Oh a picnic sounds like fun! I love to pack a lunch and hit the trail!

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  8. No scale can measure, indeed! Nor can it measure the happiness they bring us.

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  9. aloha Adriana - cool on defining "picnic time" i like that. aloha.

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