Friday, March 29, 2013

Dandelion Smiles

Carpe Diem
March 29th - dandelion

dandelion smiles -
late at night, under full moon
two lovers embraced


NaHaiWriMo
March 29th - hook

thin willow branches
streatching towards the clear lake 
as hooks for my dreams



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17 comments:

  1. Pat HattMarch 29, 2013 at 1:28 AM

    Dreams of the lake that I will take.

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  2. DanaMarch 29, 2013 at 2:03 AM

    "as hooks for my dreams"—Beautiful!

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  3. Maggie GraceMarch 29, 2013 at 4:18 AM

    Both beautiful. Agree with Dana..."as hooks for my dreams".

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleMarch 29, 2013 at 4:43 AM

    An extraordinary haiku for Carpe Diem, very romantic ... can feel romance in the air, the feeling of Spring.

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  5. Shannon LawrenceMarch 29, 2013 at 6:44 AM

    Hooks for your dreams. I like that. As well as the sweet dandelions.

    Shannon at The Warrior Muse

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  6. PirateGunnMarch 29, 2013 at 8:05 AM

    The peacefulness and imagery are very nice

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  7. AnonymousMarch 29, 2013 at 9:51 AM

    I enjoyed both of these.
    Kindling sweet memories, thank you :)

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  8. Amrit SinhaMarch 29, 2013 at 12:32 PM

    Dandelion smiles ... lovely !!!

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  9. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 29, 2013 at 2:22 PM

    I can't help but feel that there's something ominous about that lovers' embrace under the full moon. Could it be because you are writing in Transylvania? :)

    Dandelion’s Fortitude

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    1. brudbergMarch 29, 2013 at 4:50 PM

      Ha :-) That bites

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    2. UnknownMarch 29, 2013 at 5:19 PM

      I'm writing from near Transylvania, so that must be the reason.

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    3. MarkMarch 30, 2013 at 11:06 AM

      I'm enjoying this little exchange, although I sense Count Dracula lurking somewhere in the background...

      Dandelion Season

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  10. brudbergMarch 29, 2013 at 4:50 PM

    I love the full moon embrace

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  11. Christine RainsMarch 29, 2013 at 10:27 PM

    I love the imagery here!

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  12. WabiSabiMarch 29, 2013 at 11:02 PM

    I can just see those dandelions shining in the moonlight laughing at the lovers!

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  13. M PaxMarch 29, 2013 at 11:39 PM

    love the idea of branches stretching as hooks for dreams. Beautiful :) Enjoy the weekend.

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