Thursday, March 28, 2013

Kites and Dreams

Carpe Diem 
March 28th - kite

all children clapping
waiting for favorable wind -
I release the ropes


NaHaiWriMo
March 28th - sleep

 no sleep without dreams...
while late March snow is falling
I dream without sleep



19 comments:

  1. The kite haiku is nice
    I love the one on sleep

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  2. I like that twist in the second one. :)

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  3. The last is a conundrum indeed

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  4. We fly kites for children, don't we?

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  5. two magic moments. Thank you :)

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  6. Both lovely. Adore your Nahaiwri haiku.

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  7. sleep speaks to me...very deeply...

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  8. I like the idea of setting the kite free.

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  9. Last couple of days the wind was ice cold, so much better having the wind of your haiku.

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  10. How freeing to 'release the ropes.'

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  11. You're letting the kite go where it will? Ah...

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  12. The idea of releasing the ropes seems to symbolise letting the children enjoy a free spirit!

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  13. lovely haikus!
    Nutschell
    www.thewritingnut.com

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  14. That one on sleep is really good.

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  15. Lovely set Adriana, I like the one on kite the most. Thank you for your every day effort and energy to write and share haiku with Carpe Diem.

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  16. aloha Adriana, i like the connection you are making with that child-spirit in all of us. very cool as your last line pulls it all together with an ah and ah-ha. fun. aloha.

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