Thursday, March 28, 2013

Kites and Dreams

Carpe Diem 
March 28th - kite

all children clapping
waiting for favorable wind -
I release the ropes


NaHaiWriMo
March 28th - sleep

 no sleep without dreams...
while late March snow is falling
I dream without sleep



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19 comments:

  1. JazzbumpaMarch 28, 2013 at 12:16 AM

    The kite haiku is nice
    I love the one on sleep

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  2. DanaMarch 28, 2013 at 12:21 AM

    I like that twist in the second one. :)

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  3. Pat HattMarch 28, 2013 at 12:50 AM

    The last is a conundrum indeed

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  4. CharleenMarch 28, 2013 at 12:58 AM

    We fly kites for children, don't we?

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  5. AnonymousMarch 28, 2013 at 1:46 AM

    two magic moments. Thank you :)

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  6. Maggie GraceMarch 28, 2013 at 3:42 AM

    Both lovely. Adore your Nahaiwri haiku.

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  7. joanneMarch 28, 2013 at 3:44 AM

    sleep speaks to me...very deeply...

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  8. PirateGunnMarch 28, 2013 at 5:55 AM

    Ohh..that second haiku!!!

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  9. AnonymousMarch 28, 2013 at 5:59 AM

    I like the idea of setting the kite free.

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  10. Amrit SinhaMarch 28, 2013 at 9:28 AM

    And the kite soars high :-)

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  11. RheumatologeMarch 28, 2013 at 3:36 PM

    Last couple of days the wind was ice cold, so much better having the wind of your haiku.

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  12. WabiSabiMarch 28, 2013 at 4:25 PM

    How freeing to 'release the ropes.'

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  13. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 28, 2013 at 4:36 PM

    You're letting the kite go where it will? Ah...

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  14. Gemma WisemanMarch 28, 2013 at 8:03 PM

    The idea of releasing the ropes seems to symbolise letting the children enjoy a free spirit!

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  15. nutschellMarch 28, 2013 at 8:03 PM

    lovely haikus!
    Nutschell
    www.thewritingnut.com

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  16. Christine RainsMarch 28, 2013 at 9:53 PM

    Absolutely lovely.

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  17. brudbergMarch 28, 2013 at 11:15 PM

    That one on sleep is really good.

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  18. ChèvrefeuilleMarch 29, 2013 at 5:10 AM

    Lovely set Adriana, I like the one on kite the most. Thank you for your every day effort and energy to write and share haiku with Carpe Diem.

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  19. AnonymousMarch 29, 2013 at 11:27 AM

    aloha Adriana, i like the connection you are making with that child-spirit in all of us. very cool as your last line pulls it all together with an ah and ah-ha. fun. aloha.

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