Monday, March 11, 2013

Serenity

Carpe Diem

March 11th prompt - #142, Urasaka (serene)

serene day outdoors:
the spring sun bathing in lake,
caressing new herbs


a puppy'slook
after stealing your shoe -
serene eyes

NaHaiWriMo

March 11th prompt - new moon

spring celebration:
dark sky awaiting for the
new moon in silver

new moon
drown in the sleeping lake
in cicadas' song

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26 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 11, 2013 at 12:18 AM

    I know that puppy look very well! Very nice haiku

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    1. Magical Mystical TeacherMarch 11, 2013 at 12:43 AM

      I know that puppy look too, but I'd call it mischievous!

      Tranquility in Yellow

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    2. UnknownMarch 11, 2013 at 1:12 PM

      It is a little mischievious sometimes, isn't it?

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  2. UnknownMarch 11, 2013 at 12:53 AM

    Loved the haiku referencing the puppy - the innocent look even after returning a destroyed shoes or slippers. lol

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  3. joanneMarch 11, 2013 at 1:31 AM

    'spring sunbathing in lake' - an mental image of an 'Ahhh' moment...

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    1. UnknownMarch 11, 2013 at 1:13 PM

      thank you, Joanne! then, I've reached my goal ;) and you've made my day!

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  4. WabiSabiMarch 11, 2013 at 3:32 AM

    I can picture the spring sun bathing in the lake!! Dog's look says "who me?'

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    1. UnknownMarch 11, 2013 at 1:17 PM

      yes, it does! and is quite believeble, isn't it?

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  5. LollyMarch 11, 2013 at 4:22 AM

    wow! that second line "the spring sun bathing..." Love that!

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  6. AnonymousMarch 11, 2013 at 4:32 AM

    haha smiled at the puppy's look aww

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    1. UnknownMarch 11, 2013 at 1:19 PM

      they're just adorable, we all have at least a memory of puppies innocent looks in guilty situations!

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    2. UnknownMarch 11, 2013 at 1:20 PM

      we all have such amemory of guily puppies looking innocent! it's close to my soul and recent for me. last weekend my puppy destroyed a nice pair of boots I just loved but I had to forgive those eyes.

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  7. PirateGunnMarch 11, 2013 at 7:59 AM

    Lovely first haiku, though noticed people fell in love with puppy eyes!

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    1. UnknownMarch 11, 2013 at 1:16 PM

      those puppy eyes got all the attention, hah? ;)

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  8. Amrit SinhaMarch 11, 2013 at 9:21 AM

    The puppy haiku is so cute :-)

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    1. UnknownMarch 11, 2013 at 1:15 PM

      I know, I loved it when I came up with it and it even made me consider writing more modern haiku

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  9. AnonymousMarch 11, 2013 at 12:24 PM

    Beautiful set of haiku. The second haiku stole my heart :-)

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  10. Sri ValliMarch 11, 2013 at 2:15 PM

    Lovely set, I loved the first two <3

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  11. DanaMarch 11, 2013 at 3:00 PM

    "in cicadas' song"—just lovely!

    Happy Monday. ☺

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  12. brudbergMarch 11, 2013 at 10:43 PM

    A that puppy line made me smile :-)

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  13. Redecórate con Lola GodoyMarch 11, 2013 at 11:51 PM

    Wow, your blog is wonderful. Kisses from Spain.

    http://redecoratelg.blogspot.com.es/

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