wind caressing trees - a late winter symphony sang among strangers
First: I love to welcome you Adriana on Carpe Diem, I am your host for this daily meme and I am glad to see that you've find your way to here. Second: What a wonderful haiku you share here with us. 'a late winter symphony' is a great line. I love the way how you've used our prompt for today in a wonderfully composed haiku which could have been written by one of our classical haiku masters. Thank you so much for sharing this little gem with Carpe Diem's haiku community. Hope to see you here again.
@Kristjaan: thank you, Kristjaan for the welcome. I prefer classical over modern haiku, that influenece my writing. I'll come back, I love your promts and the approach of the participants in your haiku community.
@Gemma: Just my intention! I'm happy when I get to convey my message!
I can hear the wind singing with the trees!
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wind caressing trees -
ReplyDeletea late winter symphony
sang among strangers
First: I love to welcome you Adriana on Carpe Diem, I am your host for this daily meme and I am glad to see that you've find your way to here.
Second: What a wonderful haiku you share here with us. 'a late winter symphony' is a great line. I love the way how you've used our prompt for today in a wonderfully composed haiku which could have been written by one of our classical haiku masters. Thank you so much for sharing this little gem with Carpe Diem's haiku community. Hope to see you here again.
Namaste
There is a hollow sense of silent distance that is quite dramatic in this scene!
ReplyDelete@WabiSabi: That was the idea!
ReplyDelete@Jennifer: Thank you!
@Magical Mystical Teacher: Just a little bit!
@Kristjaan: thank you, Kristjaan for the welcome. I prefer classical over modern haiku, that influenece my writing. I'll come back, I love your promts and the approach of the participants in your haiku community.
@Gemma: Just my intention! I'm happy when I get to convey my message!
this is quite lovely i can feel those trees swaying with the wind!!
ReplyDeleteat times I can hear the crackling and snapping sounds of the branches in time with the music in the wind...lovely words
ReplyDeletethank you, Joanne and Typewriterpoet!
ReplyDeleteHi, and welcome to this community that Christan keep together. This haiku was really impressive. I love it.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Brudberg! I like Carpe Diem and I think I'm going to be around for a while!
DeleteThanks you for sharing this wonderful haiku with us Adriana. Strangers no more hope :)
ReplyDelete:) I hope so, too, Jrb!
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