Carpe Diem
May 14th - The Hermit
all our world's wisdom -
children's happy, lovely smiles
in morning sun rays
under the blue sky,
his Inner Self connection -
no Sunday service
NaHaiWriMo
May 14th - neccessity
blue butterfly wings -
all my happy dreams shattered
by reality
Bringing delight with the ones today in sight!
ReplyDeletesomething like that!
DeleteGlad you're back. ☺
ReplyDeleteThanks, Dana!
Deleteglad to be back!
your third lines pack an emotional punch.....very well-written haiku
ReplyDeletethank you Joanna! I hope so!
DeleteI think your first speaks not to wisdom, but innocence
ReplyDeleteThere's something subversive about the second
The sadness of the third evokes the path to wisdom
Well done, all of them
Cheers!
JzB
thank you, jazz!
DeleteWelcome back to the Internet :-)
ReplyDeletethank you! it's good to be back!
DeleteWelcome back :-) and your last haiku is masterful
ReplyDeletethank you, Bjorn!
DeleteWelcome back! Love that first one about wisdom in children's smiles.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Christine!
DeleteWelcome back. I hope you time away was delightful. :D
ReplyDeleteIt was: silence, time to read and realx - much needed relaxation.
DeleteWelcome back Adriana. You were missed. The wisdom of children is pure and very true.
ReplyDeleteIt is. Only they know the purest and the most impostant of knolwdge is held in innocense and sincerity.
DeleteNo Sunday service? But he must be serving something or someone on Sunday! :)
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Deletenot this one. not on a Sunday!
DeleteWelcome back, Adriana! I found the second one to ring true with me since I have no outwardly recognized religion. Your third one just jarred me emotionally and I felt for you if having known that feeling. Will be back next week. Sorry you just got back and I'm on a mission. Will come back neeeeding to write ;-O
ReplyDeleteGood luck with your mission, Maggie! Happy to hear my words and feelings resonate with others!
DeleteGreat to see you back Adriana and with such lovely haiku too :)
ReplyDeleteyhanks, jrb! it's good to be back!
DeleteYou paint vivid images with your words :-)
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