Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Wisdom

After too much time away from my very good friend, the Internet, I'm back to it.

Carpe Diem
May 14th - The Hermit

all our world's wisdom -
children's happy, lovely smiles
in morning sun rays

under the blue sky,
his Inner Self connection -
no Sunday service

NaHaiWriMo
May 14th - neccessity

blue butterfly wings -
all my happy dreams shattered
by reality




26 comments:

  1. Bringing delight with the ones today in sight!

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  2. your third lines pack an emotional punch.....very well-written haiku

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  3. I think your first speaks not to wisdom, but innocence

    There's something subversive about the second

    The sadness of the third evokes the path to wisdom

    Well done, all of them

    Cheers!
    JzB

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  4. Welcome back to the Internet :-)

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  5. Welcome back :-) and your last haiku is masterful

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  6. Welcome back! Love that first one about wisdom in children's smiles.

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  7. Welcome back. I hope you time away was delightful. :D

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    1. It was: silence, time to read and realx - much needed relaxation.

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  8. Welcome back Adriana. You were missed. The wisdom of children is pure and very true.

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    1. It is. Only they know the purest and the most impostant of knolwdge is held in innocense and sincerity.

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  9. No Sunday service? But he must be serving something or someone on Sunday! :)

    The Hermit

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    2. not this one. not on a Sunday!

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  10. Welcome back, Adriana! I found the second one to ring true with me since I have no outwardly recognized religion. Your third one just jarred me emotionally and I felt for you if having known that feeling. Will be back next week. Sorry you just got back and I'm on a mission. Will come back neeeeding to write ;-O

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    1. Good luck with your mission, Maggie! Happy to hear my words and feelings resonate with others!

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  11. Great to see you back Adriana and with such lovely haiku too :)

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  12. You paint vivid images with your words :-)

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