Today's haiku by Kyoshi is written at the end of Spring,which he calls 'the night of Spring'. As Kristjaan said, that's a wonderful imagery for the departure of Spring.
I really liked this prompt and felt very happy to write on this theme.
The special haiku:
haru no yo ya tsukue no ue no hiji-makura
the night of Spring -
an elbow-pillow
on the desk
an elbow-pillow
on the desk
Carpe Diem Special #37
May 17th - The night od Spring
the night of this Spring -
decorating my window
last apple -blossoms
late apple-blossoms
swung by the late-Sping faint beeze -
writing spring haiku
last sight of Spring moon -
the summer morning ballads
in forest's birds song
NahaiWriMo
May 17th - Quandary or Quietude
the peace in her voice
filling her yard in sping sun -
acacia perfume
What a wonderful ode to Spring Adriana. I am glad that you like the Special haiku.
ReplyDeleteThank you, kristjaan!
DeleteI especially love the third one in this great set.
ReplyDeleteYou sure gave spring a run, great job under your spring time sun
ReplyDeletewonderful set... my favorite's the 3rd one. though i do love the image of apple blossoms :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful imagery
ReplyDeleteI hear birds chirping as I write this
Nice companions for your words.
Cheers!
JZB
Very nice! I love the first and third ones.
ReplyDeleteLovely. I especially loved the last one. :)
ReplyDeleteI can hear summer in the birds' songs too!
ReplyDeleteI love the beauty in your haiku ... magical !!!
ReplyDeleteA wonderful tribute to a special season that brings so much hope...
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Thanks for stopping by and helping to make Rachel's day special.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the lovely verses.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful Haiku!
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